Talk Nasty!

I swear this came off the top of my head with no revisions or anything, tell me what u think:

ur at the beach
the sun feels so good on ur body
u could fall asleep forever
with the warmth of the sun protecting u
a tall well built guy walks ur way
dark brown hair and baby blue eyes
hes obviously spent some time at the gym
he smiles at u
he asks if he can put some more lotion on ur back so u dont get burned from the sun
u say…
of course
so he takes ur lotion
squirts some on his hand
and rubs ur shoulders
u moan with pleasure
it feels sooooooooo good
he stands over you
u can hear the waves crashing and it sounds so natural and peaceful
a few seagulls gawk in the distance
and the guy continues to rub ur back and makes his way down ur spine
so sensual
so tender
he asks if u like it and u utter out a yes, completely absorbed in pleasure
after hes done he starts stroking ur hair
kissing ur shoulders
u are drifting off

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the sun is starting to set
a cool breeze brushes over u
the weather is perfect
its just u and him
he continues to watch over u and kisses ur whole body
by now ur in a dream
a dream of pure extasy
a glimpse of the heaven doors
he picks u up ever so gently
he carries u home
u feel so relaxed
like god is carrying u and nothing can harm u
u feel weightless
he gets u home, a small apartment just past the boardwalk overlooking the beach
its nice and cozy
he tucks u into ur bed
the blankets feel cool and refreshing
he comes into bed with u
ur still in ur dream world as he wraps his arms around u and kisses u goodnight
its peaceful
u could never imagine a greater feeling than this
a feeling of pure bliss, joy, pleasure
true happiness
and it stays with u forever

the end
lol she lives in another state but ok

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